focus and attract
her hair and fingers look like mine
so you can take this photo and put your face on it!;P
ha yu 顯靈
ha yu? 下雨? 夏宇?
夏宇I like the poem
do i? i didnt put in puntuations because i want to filter some readers like last time ha ha ha!thanks i am glad to hear this as i am your reader:>:>:>this is written from the hallowed soul while bottled emotions popping in and out
hey I still don't understand what is about filter..anyway...no puntuation... I have ever written an article for ET with no punctuation as well... this is an 突破 for meyea. like it much!!
can i read your groundbreaking feature?i am in a state of metamorphosis these days.filtering.. 有些人因為沒有標點,對本詩產生的興趣減低,正是吾願。詩意沈重,只寫給同樣能體會胡思亂想的人。
I see I seebut I wonder it will draw more attention insteadyea tomorrow I search it back at the wiser and send to you
想到標點的重量,何以把其說成輕省,把它隱沒,可它又主宰了我的隨意,無意識有意地流動。若讓它曾真實存在的時候,成了一口煙,讓你打盹一會,又清醒地寫起字來。
我發現﹐我看時在自行加上標點。也試過﹐隨意停頓在任何一個字裡或行間。消失的標點﹐我想起我的同事說﹐沒有耐性看我那篇稿﹐但很喜歡。
因為讀者在找座位,對號入座,而我寫字的人,只是飢渴地把散亂的椅子鋪於眼前。有空時,把文章email我啊!
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（tonite music) photo by Bobby Baby
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her hair and fingers look like mine
so you can take this photo and put your face on it!;P
ha yu 顯靈
ha yu? 下雨? 夏宇?
夏宇
I like the poem
do i? i didnt put in puntuations because i want to filter some readers like last time ha ha ha!
thanks i am glad to hear this as i am your reader:>:>:>
this is written from the hallowed soul while bottled emotions popping in and out
hey I still don't understand what is about filter..
anyway...
no puntuation... I have ever written an article for ET with no punctuation as well...
this is an 突破 for me
yea. like it much!!
can i read your groundbreaking feature?
i am in a state of metamorphosis these days.
filtering.. 有些人因為沒有標點,對本詩產生的興趣減低,正是吾願。詩意沈重,只寫給同樣能體會胡思亂想的人。
I see I see
but I wonder it will draw more attention instead
yea tomorrow I search it back at the wiser and send to you
想到標點的重量,何以把其說成輕省,把它隱沒,可它又主宰了我的隨意,無意識有意地流動。
若讓它曾真實存在的時候,成了一口煙,讓你打盹一會,又清醒地寫起字來。
我發現﹐我看時在自行加上標點。
也試過﹐隨意停頓在任何一個字裡或行間。
消失的標點﹐我想起我的同事說﹐沒有耐性看我那篇稿﹐但很喜歡。
因為讀者在找座位,對號入座,
而我
寫字的人,只是飢渴地把散亂的椅子鋪於眼前。
有空時,把文章email我啊!
發佈留言